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“Egad,” said the professor. “I can’t take it anymore!”

He stopped the bone saw.

“The pain! The torture! By Jove! The poor girl, only 19, turned to the streets for cock and crack…how could she?”

He cried and wiped a tear with his bloody hand.

“How could she do this to her poor family? Don’t they know where she is? Don’t they know what she’s doing?”

A rustle in the far corner made him turn his eyes from the girl on the slab. He met the semi-lucid gaze of his daughter, who was trying to sit up. She held a baby bottle in her hands.

“Daddy…daddy,” she said, lifting the bottle to her lips. “I don’t feel so good. How long until I’m fixed?”

The professor looked at his daughter, something bulging from beneath her jaundiced skin.

“Not long, dearest, not long at all.”

“Where’s my fucking LIVER!!!” she screamed.

“Moments, dearest…moments.”

Just then, the girl on the table woke up, piercing the air with her screams. The professor slapped his hand over her mouth.

“Quiet, dear…quiet. Just a few more minutes and you’ll be all done…”

He lowered the goggles over his eyes, picked up the saw and flicked the switch. “My God, do your poor parents know where you are?”

Date Written: October 23, 2004
Author: The Rid
Average Vote: 4.33333

Comments:
10/29/2004 TheBuyer (5): I'm really enjoying this violence kick lately. Credit should be given to OSS and John Slocum for consistantly raising the 'sicko' bar.
10/29/2004 anonymous: Yeah. I like the dark shit.
10/29/2004 John Slocum: Thanks, TheBuyer!
10/30/2004 Streifenbeuteldachs (3): It was good. I thought the dialogue was a little too choppy and lacked relevance. I would have liked to have seen it more directly support the professor's moral dilemma.
10/30/2004 Streifenbeuteldachs: Fucking crap, I meant to 4 star it. Next responder, cover my error will you?
10/30/2004 Litcube (5): Done. I felt more horror than shock, and I liked that. Why did that sound gay?
10/30/2004 The Rid: This sounds gay: "I totally wanna have sex with a man." I'm glad someone else felt the horror. I threw up after I wrote it.
10/30/2004 Litcube: I want to fall asleep inside you. How 'bout that?
10/30/2004 Litcube: Wait.. Did that sound gay?
10/30/2004 The Rid: If by "gay" you mean "want to have sex with the same sex," then yes. If you just mean happy, then no.
10/30/2004 Litcube: What if I were to say, "I'd be happy to fall asleep inside you"? What then, Rid?
10/30/2004 The Rid: If I accepted, I think we'd fall in the category of "gay."
10/30/2004 Litcube: Dude, that's fuckin' sick.
10/30/2004 The Rid: Yeah. But hot.
10/30/2004 Litcube: Totally.
10/30/2004 Dylan Danko: Is this a real conversation?
10/30/2004 The Rid: Uh...define "real."
10/30/2004 qualcomm: four stars, plus one, equals five stars
10/31/2004 TheBuyer: just kiss already
06/18/2005 Templeton Dink (4.5): Excellent short, The Rid, I may have been too harsh towards you with too little an introduction.
06/19/2005 Kenji X (4): The bone saw thing set the tone but I was still eager to see what came next. And Gay isn't Gay until you have full insertion -- I read that somewhere.
06/19/2005 Kenji X: The bone saw thing set the tone but I was still eager to see what came next. And Gay isn't Gay until you have full insertion -- I read that somewhere.
12/1/2006 Master Bates (4.5): By Jove!