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He stripped her naked. While he put away her clothes he made her stand in the middle of the room. He closed the drawer, took her hand and led her toward the bed. He sat on the edge of the bed and stood her in front of him. "Get on your knees." She obeyed. He stroked her hair and she closed her eyes, absorbing his touch. "Look at me.” She looked into him. “Do you like to suck my cock?" Still looking into his eyes, she nodded. She knew if she looked away while admitting her passion he would make her look into his eyes and confess it again. "Good girl. Would you like to suck my cock now?" She knew this was a real question: he would not force her; she was only to be driven by her genuine desire. All she could bring herself to say: “Yes.” "'Yes', what?" "Yes, I want to." "'Yes, I want to', what? Look at me." "Yes, I want to suck your cock, now." "Good girl." He stood and as her eyes followed him up, her buttocks fell back on her heels. She knew to wait to be commanded to embrace him with her mouth. He touched her face and she slid her cheek across his palm. "Suck my cock, sweetheart." She started to unbuckle his belt, “No, just the zipper.” She complied and pulled the zipper down, guiding his cock and testis out of his pants. She slid her hand up his thigh as she raised herself to meet his cock. She surrounded the root of his cock with her other hand and pushed his balls up against his cock. Gently, he touched the top of her head and caressed her. She felt a warmth race down her spine and rush deep into her genitals. She licked his taut scrotum, looked up at him again, and gently pushed against a testis with her tongue. She licked to the base of his cock, straightened herself, and folding her hands on either side of his cock pressed her tongue up the base of his cock: then she shifted, slid her left hand to his side, gripping him to steady herself. With her right hand she pressed the top of his cock against his stomach, turned her head perpendicular and slid her lips around the sides of his cock. Her mouth was salivating for his cock and she spread as much of her saliva around him as she could, sliding her mouth up and down in tiny strokes, each time reaching a little farther along him. He moaned a small, soft, rich sound for her. "That's nice, sweetheart." His cock was hard and she could feel his pulse. It had a faint musky scent and deep purple capillaries stood out in bas relief. With no foreskin his penis glans glowed red. She could feel her vagina swell for him. With need and hunger and submission she straightened her head, raised herself higher, lowered his cock

Date Written: April 03, 2005
Author: soren
Average Vote: 2.4

Comments:
04/12/2005 Partytime: Oh dear.
04/12/2005 Dylan Danko (2): Yes, Partytime, indeed.
04/12/2005 TheBuyer (2): blowjobs, whee.
Also, this could have been a lot shorter and a little bit funny. Next time, author.
04/12/2005 Dick Vomit (1): cock cock cock cock testis.
04/12/2005 Mr. Pony (3): I thought the obsessive and ridiculous detail was funny and got funnier as the short progressed. The three sentences following "That's nice, sweetheart" actually got a laugh out of me. I agree that it should have been pushed further, if that was what the author was a'goin' for; and I even wonder if it was unintentional, given the apparent joke at the end. Still, not the worst first outing I've ever seen.
04/12/2005 Litcube: Author, your goal here is to inspire boners/swollen labia, no? This isn't funny, and nor did you intend it to be; it's 100% porn. You're are a lady, right? If I'm correct in my assumptions, this is new (for me) on Acme. Well executed, I thought.
04/12/2005 Mr. Pony: boners are cool
04/12/2005 Klause Muppet: Author, can you write a short about 2 lesbians?
04/12/2005 Jon Matza: Could have been a lot hornier.
04/12/2005 Will Disney: Yes, it could have!
04/12/2005 Litcube (4):