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Date Written: May 05, 2005
Author: Klause Muppet
Average Vote: 2.8333

Comments:
05/13/2005 Will Disney: This is the penis talking, here?
05/13/2005 Will Disney: Yes, I just read the title of your short. Yes, it's the penis talking.
05/13/2005 Will Disney: Why does the penis have a pile of poop on him?
05/13/2005 John Slocum: I, slocum, feel this misses the mark.
05/13/2005 Jawbreaker: Hah... Poop. That made me laugh!
05/13/2005 Front (4): I thought it was poop as well. Still, it made me laugh. And it's a drawing!
05/13/2005 The Rid: Eh. Feels like a 2, three at best.
05/13/2005 Litcube (3): Ok. It's kind of funny. Timing is important here. One has to realize that all the panel art is the same, (therefore don't spend any time on it). So go for the text, and go quickly. With the timing allowed by this, it comes off as kind of funny. According to me, that is.
05/13/2005 anonymous: The pile of poop represents communism
05/13/2005 Mr. Pony: That kind of helps, Litcube! However, I am still having a hard time following what the penis trying to tell me; whom it is speaking for at a given moment, etc. Perhaps I am tired!
05/13/2005 anonymous: Hmm, interesting. Actually, if you must know, in panel 2 the Penis is trying to tell you that the sink was left on. In panel 4 the Penis is speaking on behalf of all minorities. And finally in Panel 6 the Penis alludes to Pierre Trudeau's leadership style.
05/13/2005 Pushups: Mr. Pony, maybe your fatigue results from a lack of upper body strength.
05/13/2005 Mr. Critic (3): Hey, Author. Your explanation is even less funny than your short!
05/13/2005 anonymous: Hey Mr. Critic, I thought everything I said was suppose to be hilarious!
05/13/2005 Jawbreaker (3): I rounded up bc I thought the drawing was funny. I wasn't enthralled with the text though.
05/13/2005 The Rid (2):
05/13/2005 anonymous: Rid, do you know how long I spent on this???
05/13/2005 Front: The fact that it was done quickly and is "silly" lends charm, no? It's what made me laugh anyway, a bit like Litcube said.
05/13/2005 The Rid: Nope. Should I care? Lemme think about it...no.
05/13/2005 TheBuyer: I'll put 25 on 14 minutes.
05/13/2005 Dave Heiny (2): dumb
05/13/2005 Dave Heiny: ...if it was straight cock and not some uncircumcised bent Jewish twig, it would have been funnier.
05/13/2005 Dylan Danko: How could it be jewish? Perhaps there aren't many jews in Maine.
05/13/2005 TheBuyer: Danko, this has nothing to do with it and contains many one sentence paragraphs starting with the word 'but'.