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Screenplay Entitled the "bad emogoth vampire"
His name was richard and he was a bloody vampire and he was in 4th grade. He got his hand stuck in a toilet, but when he pulled it out it was more bloody and he ran into his parents room screaming black blood! Bloody blood! Raaar.
He was a rock star but didn't know it but it should've been quite apparent due to his pajamas with stars on them. He was quite a mystery and always was broody and thinking and his kids students didn't get him and he was underrapreciated. He would get them back with woody stakes
More to come,
the end for now
Date Written: December 30, 2009Comments:
Average Vote: 3.5
01/5/2010 Will Disney: Great! Thanks!
01/5/2010 Litcube (3.5):
01/6/2010 Mr. Pony (3.5): Pajamas bit rang a little untrue. Otherwise good.
01/6/2010 Litcube: I become disappointed with screenplay shorts, the same way I'd get disappointed when I'd watch Tom & Jerry as a kid, and it'd be the Tom & Jerry where they'd get along and solve puzzles together, as opposed to where they try to kill each other.
01/9/2010 Marvin_Bernstein: hmm it's a premise but I am going for the teenage demographics. I am looking for feedback? Should I add a premise of cutting and getting really shaggy hair? As for soundracks should I enlist the help of Good Charlotte?
01/10/2010 Marvin_Bernstein: So I am thinking of a followup as well
something where he calls the vampire support line to stay around age 15 and be this gorgeous MILF getting heart throb. I mean: it's only a matter of time before the whole older woman meets teen thing takes off as mainstream fodder for both demographics... Think of the racing hormones
01/10/2010 Marvin_Bernstein: what is wrong with pajamas anyway? I was thinkin of going for strawberries but the double entendre would be lost sadly
01/11/2010 Marvin_Bernstein (5): this rocks!!!!!!
03/4/2010 Mylittlepony: more please more please, I support you
05/3/2010 Marvin_Bernstein: is there such a think as self plagarism? This is adopted from a story I wrote in 2nd grade.
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