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Date Written: January 27, 2004Comments:
Author: Mr. Pony
Average Vote: 3.875
02/3/2004 Craig Lewis (5): My favorite moment: When the Bunny-God rears up on His hindquarters and proclaims, "This is your purpose, your meaning."
02/3/2004 Will Disney: Wait a sec! Who wrote this short? Feldspar? Maniacs?
02/3/2004 qualcomm (3): i'm giving this 3 because all it has going for it is unbelievable cuteness. holy fuck that bunny is cute. but laugh i did not. so f u, pony!
02/3/2004 Texxx (3): I too like the drawings. But the content didn't 'do it' for me.
02/3/2004 Will Disney (4): yeah, i mean, i like a bunny that says "i am your god". like in that movie donnie danko.
02/3/2004 scoop (4): There's something about the ambiguous, unnatural posture of the cute bunny in panel 6 coupled with the purpose and meaning line that catapults this out of the 3-star morass.
02/3/2004 senator (3): After the 3rd panel everything else is extraneous.
02/3/2004 Will Disney: i agree with you, senator, that the first three pack the punch
02/3/2004 anonymous: I like how Feldspar feels the need to explain and apologize for his 3 star rating. Methinks some other writers wouldn't get such special treatment.
02/3/2004 qualcomm: that's true. bad writers, for example. who is this, brad evans?
02/4/2004 Lenny: I'm not sure I'd ditch everything after panel 3. Instead, I'd take out the first two panels and keep the rest. I think that has a good flow to it.
05/5/2004 Benny Maniacs (5): In order to pay it the attention it so impertently demands, the reader must forego most of the conventions they have tucked away in their luggage. Here words are not the polite contortions of 20th century printers ink; they are alive. One must step back and look at this as a work not of one man - but a work which speeks about writing, art and the history of human culture.
07/2/2004 TheBuyer (4): K'plaH Mr. Pony.
07/2/2004 Mr. Pony: TheBuyer, what are you doing, going around, giving everyone fours? What are you up to? Explain yourself!
07/2/2004 TheBuyer: I'm having Random Shorts fun. Normally I wouldn't rate a random short lower than a five and would leave it unrated. Today is extra boring so I've lowered my standard for rating a random short. Either that or I'm harder to impress since becoming a guest of this family; This family of damnitheads. Have I really been 4'ing everything? I could've swore I dropped at least one five today.
07/2/2004 Mr. Pony: I guess it's okay to rate anything that comes your way, be it a one or a five. I think I see what you're getting at though, and while I may get yelled at for this, I have to say I admire and respect the logic of your methods.
07/2/2004 TheBuyer: Cheers!