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Date Written: August 21, 2004
Author: Ferucio P. Chhretan
Average Vote: 4.22222

08/24/2004 Will Disney (4): why did he forget? why?
08/24/2004 Dick Vomit (4): Bitchtits? Starfish?
08/24/2004 TheBuyer (5):
08/24/2004 qualcomm: the use of lines is so economical here, it borders on just plain cheap
08/24/2004 Eliza: Please go on.
08/24/2004 Jon Matza: Background in panel 4 is macaroni.
08/24/2004 Jon Matza (4):
08/24/2004 Mr. Pony: Summer: Here is a new thing for you to play with: "Negative Space". Author, good use of backgrounds to convey the mood in a subtle way. That and the use of framing and the angular distribution of Negative Space contribute almost as much as the figures to the overall effect. Here's the thing, and somebody stop me if I'm wrong. What I'm seeing here is a story told with truly outlandish and disturbing imagery, and then capped off with a slightly less disturbing (almost "mainstream disturbing") joke. The effect is sort of jarring--And I think I've seen the author do this before, sometimes it's frightening, and sometimes it flattens out the piece. Please, what does everyone else think about this issue? Discuss, then take some time to poke the robot in the next room.
08/24/2004 TheBuyer: Mr. Pony: In this case the background combined with the smirk on that asshole cat is what took this up a notch to a five from a four for me. The joke leans to the middle but the tone and look of this short rescues it.
08/24/2004 John Slocum (4):
08/24/2004 Dylan Danko: Fuck negative space!
08/24/2004 Mr. Pony (4): Now you're getting it!
08/24/2004 Litcube (4): That green and orange guy *TOTALLY* got beat the fuck right the fuck up by that cat! OUTRAGEOUS!
08/27/2004 scoop (5): Holy shit FPC, you sure creatre quite a cranky animal! Hey! Glad your back! Your sunny insides m,ake event hte most negative spaces seem like totally positive! Keep 'em coming! Five hot mother fucking stars!
09/21/2004 Streifenbeuteldachs (4): Frame 2 is gold!
12/6/2004 Mr. Pony: I can almost smell the cat's sweet sweet breath.