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It was a lonely street. There was no one else on it. He was walking alone.
A rat ran across his path. He took a step back and slipped in a puddle, falling, knocking himself unconscious. When we he woke up, he was still alone. His leg was broken. It was causing him pain. He couldn’t move.
“I could be stuck alone here for hours!” he said out loud to no one. His voice echoed against the walls. The rat ran off. He let himself drift away…
Date Written: November 19, 2003
Author: Will Disney
Average Vote: 3.5
Comments:
11/20/2003 Texxx (4): Ok - this made me laugh. It's a cry for help!
11/24/2003 Phony Millions (4): Nice and bleak and minimal 'n shit.
06/6/2004 Mr. Pony (4): 
06/7/2004 John Slocum (4): The word "one" appears 5 times in this short. Coincidence? I think not. Also, the word "on" appears 8 times. Freaks me out.
06/7/2004 Jon Matza: Well spotted, Slocum. How do you account for this, Disney?
06/7/2004 Will Disney: did i write this short? all right!
06/7/2004 qualcomm (3): you are all idiots
06/10/2004 scoop (2): Sorry, The Lerpa, it is in fact you who are the idiot, for giving this such a high rating. Three stars is gift.